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= '''crappypastra freestyle. he ruined my life.''' =
= '''crappypastra freestyle. he ruined my life.''' =
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! [https://youtu.be/imGGwLpjd9A?si=b4e6kF_hBjB_rwmo crappypastra freestyle. he ruined my life.]
! [https://youtu.be/imGGwLpjd9A?si=b4e6kF_hBjB_rwmo crappypastra freestyle. he ruined my life.]
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<center>[[File:Crappypastra freestyle.jpg|250x250px]]</center>
<center>[[File:Tinion's Finale.png|250x250px]]</center>
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| '''Released:''' July 8th 2024
| '''Released:''' July 8th 2024
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| '''Released:''' Yes (YouTube only)
| '''Released:''' Yes (YouTube only)
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== '''1. Background & Development''' ==
Following a disappointing watch of Pastra's "[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iKdxlGy_2N0 I Rewrote Jeff The Killer]", Bite let off steam on an emotionally-driven freestyle consisting of 99% scolding and 1% understanding. According to him, the rewriting of Jeff The Killer began "very promisingly" then by the second half "plumetted to the depths of hell".
The instrumentals used for the song are type beats taken from YouTube. The third beat was originally used in "Headlock", a scrapped Sogmeister diss supposed to release after "[[I CAN KEEP GOING]]". The final instrumental is taken from the Swans song "The Sound".
== '''2. IMDB Review''' ==
Bite has written an IMDB review on Pastra's video nearly a year after his first watch.
"This was so gripping and incredibly promising. The first half is a really great setup that had me at the edge of my seat thinking where Jeff's story would go next, as it already set itself apart from the original as unexpected.
The moment Liu is introduced, the story shifts to his perspective of everything, which already struck me as really descriptive for someone as uncooperative as him. That's when things began falling apart for me. The more Jeff's upbringing progressed, the more unfillfilled and incomplete it felt. There were moments that I thought the story was going to pick up again, such as them going for a bike ride "like the good old days" before being confronted by the bullies, but even by the end of that interaction it felt like something was missing. I was devoid of hope when Liu just watched Jeff kill his mother and reveal that apparently, he burnt down their old house, because the kid with zero background trauma before has always been mentally ill or something.
After the detectives hear Liu's cinematic rendition of "Jeff The Killer", they leave to continue their case. Once again, my hopes built up as the scene mysteriously illustrates Liu to have been feeling odd trying to sleep, before finally noticing the window's open. It's a slow burn of a scene, but finally, Jeff reveals himself. Liu realizes he left the knife at the kitchen when he went to go open the door, so he makes a run for it. I'll just quote the ending.
"When the blades connected with flesh, there was a long, drawn out silence... That day, only one of the two brothers walked away alive".
Two hours later, I have no fucking idea what to make of this cliffhanger. Why? Because I don't see myself taking in a message or wondering what could've possibly happened, I'm just left with a question and no way to answer it, for no reason at all."
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== '''3. Trivia''' ==
* The album cover is a picture of Bite mixed with the eyes of Pastra's Jeff The Killer drawing.
* There are notable versions of the intro recorded live with Franku's "assistance", as seen in the Gallery section.
* In the end of the song, after Bite clips the ending on Medal, you can hear Nightsparta's microphone crumble in the background.
== '''4. Gallery''' ==
<gallery mode="nolines" widths="320" heights="180">
File:MedalTVScreenRecording20240708143515-tr-edit.mp4|''Franku's grand introductory.''
File:MedalTVScreenRecording20240708144135-tr-edit (1).mp4|''Franku's small, yet impactful adlib.''
</gallery>
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